Love Unsent by Vykas

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Oops, Wrong Hands

The classroom smelled faintly of chalk and floor polish, the kind of scent that clung to every notebook and uniform. Ramona sat by the window, her cactus perched on the sill in a chipped ceramic pot. It was the only plant she hadn’t killed, a stubborn little survivor with spines sharp enough to keep the world at bay. She liked to think it mirrored her—quiet, prickly, but alive in its own way.

Her notebook was filled with letters she never meant to send. Scribbles in ink, crossed-out lines, fragments of confessions.

Another page, folded and hidden deeper, whispered: 

I think we’re doomed. I think I’m cursed to love you in silence. Every time you smile, it feels like the world is mocking me. And yet, I keep writing, because maybe the words will save me when you can’t.

She never thought anyone would see them. They were her secret letters, her unsent truths. But fate had a cruel sense of humor. When Ronski slid the paper across her desk with that half-smile—the one that made her stomach drop—she knew the universe had betrayed her. 

“You write songs now?” he asked, voice low, teasing but kind. His fingers tapped the desk like he was already setting the rhythm. He was always like that, turning moments into music, even stray dogs into lyrics.

Behind them, Harvey drummed his pencil against his notebook, each tap sharp, like a countdown to disaster. His eyes narrowed, catching the exchange. He was the drummer, the skater, the sarcastic best friend who hid his feelings behind jokes.

Her throat tightened. It wasn’t a song. It was a confession. Every word inked in shaky handwriting, every line a truth she swore she’d never say out loud. And now, the boy who made friends with everyone, even stray dogs, had read it.

Ramona wanted to disappear. Or at least, to be a cactus—silent, prickly, impossible to kill.

Later, at band practice, the banner they’d painted in messy strokes hung crooked on the wall: Chords and Strings. Their name was supposed to be a joke, but now it felt like a prophecy, because every chord, every string, every beat was tangled in secrets she couldn’t keep anymore.

Practice Makes Tension

The music room was their second home, cramped and echoing, smelling faintly of varnish, sweat, and the metallic tang of old strings. Posters of forgotten concerts curled at the edges, their colors fading into sepia. In the corner, their banner clung to the wall, the brushstrokes cracked and peeling like old strings stretched too far.

Ramona adjusted the strap of her bass, the leather stiff against her shoulder. Her fingers hovered over the strings, trembling just enough to betray her nerves. She tried to focus on the cool steel beneath her fingertips, but her thoughts kept circling back to the folded paper that had appeared in their practice folder.

Ronski tuned his guitar, the sharp twang of each string slicing through the silence. He had that way of looking at people—like he was listening even when they weren’t speaking. His gaze lingered on her, steady and unshaken. “So… who submitted this?” he asked, holding up the sheet. His voice was warm, steady. He was always steady. Even when the world tilted, Ronski was the anchor.

Harvey sat behind the drum kit, twirling his sticks with restless energy. The wood clicked against each other, sharp and impatient. He leaned back, smirking, but his eyes betrayed something heavier. “Congratulations,” he muttered, just loud enough for Ramona to hear, “I hate you.” It was his catchphrase, but tonight it carried weight. His tone was edged, his glance sharp, before he looked away and slammed a stick against the snare, testing its bite.

Ronski unfolded the page titled Harmonic Shame, read aloud, then strummed a chord and began to sing.

Here I am, writing you this song,

Not thinking twice about what could go wrong.

All I want is for you to know,

This feeling I’ve hidden, it’s starting to show.

I’ll spill it now, I’ve come too far,

Been hiding this truth right from the start.

Did you ever see that you’re in my heart?

I’ve been holding back, but it’s tearing me apart.

That maybe someday, we’ll find our way,

And I could hold you, with nothing left to say.

Maybe someday, in each other’s arms,

I could call you mine, safe from harm.

Ronski’s voice softened as he finished. “This… feels personal,” he said, glancing at her. “Like it was written for someone.” His tone carried curiosity, not suspicion.

Ramona’s bassline faltered. The note came out flat, clumsy. She caught herself, forcing her fingers back into rhythm, but Harvey noticed. He always noticed. His drumming grew louder, sharper, like he was trying to drown her out.

“Whoever wrote it,” Harvey said, spinning his sticks, “they’ve got guts. Or maybe they’re just reckless.” His eyes flicked toward Ramona, quick and accusing, before he looked away.

Ronski glanced between them, confusion flickering in his eyes. He didn’t know the war happening beneath the music—the war sparked by a song someone had slipped into their folder, a song that carried too much truth to be anonymous.

When the song ended, silence pressed down on them, heavier than the noise had been. Ronski set his guitar down gently, like it was fragile. “That was… different,” he said, looking at Ramona. His kindness was heavier now, almost unbearable, like he was holding something back.

Harvey scoffed, spinning his sticks between his fingers. “Different? Try disastrous.” His voice was sharp, but his eyes avoided hers. The accusation hung in the air, unspoken but undeniable.

Gossip in Stereo

The hallway was louder than usual, a chorus of sneakers squeaking against linoleum, lockers slamming in uneven rhythm, and laughter bouncing off the walls. But beneath the everyday noise, Ramona heard something sharper—her name, tangled in whispers.

“Did you hear? She wrote him a song.” 

“No, it wasn’t a song—it was a letter.” 

“Ronski read it. I swear I saw him smile.” 

“Harvey looked pissed. Maybe it was about him?”

The words spread like feedback through a broken speaker, distorted and impossible to ignore. Ramona kept her head down, clutching her books to her chest. The cactus on her desk at home felt safer than this jungle of voices. At least the cactus didn’t gossip.

Ronski walked beside her, casual as ever, greeting classmates with that easy grin. He didn’t seem bothered by the rumors, but his kindness toward her had shifted—gentler, more deliberate. He held the door open, asked if she’d eaten lunch, offered to carry her books. It should have felt sweet, but instead it pressed on her chest like pity.

Harvey, on the other hand, had vanished into his own orbit. She spotted him skating circles in the courtyard, earbuds jammed in, drumsticks poking out of his back pocket. He didn’t join them for lunch, didn’t crack jokes in class. When she caught his eye across the hallway, he looked away, tapping his fingers against his thigh like he was drumming out his frustration.

By the time band practice rolled around, the tension had followed them into the music room. Ramona set her bass down carefully, her hands clammy. Ronski strummed a few chords, humming under his breath. Harvey dropped into his seat behind the drums, spinning his sticks with a sharp flick.

“People are talking,” Ramona said finally, her voice low, almost swallowed by the hum of the amplifiers.

Ronski glanced at her, his expression unreadable. “Let them talk,” he said. “We know the truth.”

But that was the problem. The truth wasn’t simple. Was it a letter? A song? A confession? Or all of them at once? And now, it was out in the world, reshaping everything.

Harvey slammed his sticks against the snare, the sound cracking like thunder. “Yeah, well, maybe some truths should’ve stayed unsaid,” he muttered, his tone sharp, his eyes flicking toward her before darting away.

Ramona flinched. The words stung more than the rumors.

The room filled with silence, heavy and suffocating. For the first time, their band felt less like a sanctuary and more like a battlefield.

Strings Attached

The music room throbbed with noise tonight, amplifiers buzzing low like a storm gathering in the walls.

Ramona sat with her bass across her lap; her student ID tucked into the corner of her notebook. The laminated card caught the light: Ramona Felicity Seno. Harvey had teased her about the middle name since they were kids, but only he was allowed to call her Monafe. To everyone else, she was just Ramona.

Across the room, Harvey spun his drumsticks, the wood clicking together in restless rhythm. His backpack lay open, a scuffed folder sticking out with his full name scribbled in marker: Harvey Mhor Rivera. Ramona smiled faintly despite herself. Mhor. That was what she called him, always had, since they were little.

Ronski strummed a soft chord, the sound hanging in the air. “We can’t keep pretending nothing’s wrong,” he said, his voice steady but edged with concern. His eyes found hers, searching, waiting.

Harvey’s laugh cut through the silence, sharp and sarcastic. “Finally—finally someone said it.” He slammed his sticks against the snare, the crack splitting the room. “You think you can just write songs like that, spill your heart out, and act like it doesn’t change anything? You think I don’t see what’s happening?”

Ramona swallowed hard, her chest tight as the ghosts of her unsent words rose, trembling in a voice she could no longer silence. 

“It was mine,” she said, each syllable breaking under the strain. “The song. The letter. All of it.”

Ronski’s guitar went silent. He looked at her, not with shock, but with quiet recognition. “I figured,” he said softly. His tone carried respect, but it was restrained, unreadable. To Ramona, it felt like pity—gentle, heavy, almost unbearable.

“Mhor…” Ramona’s voice cracked as she turned toward Harvey. “I didn’t mean for anyone to read it.”

Harvey’s laugh was bitter, hollow. “Of course you didn’t. But you did. And now everyone knows. And guess what, Monafe? I’ve been carrying feelings too. But I don’t write them down in pretty lyrics—I bury them under drumbeats. And maybe that’s why no one notices.”

The words hung heavy, raw and jagged.

Ronski shifted, his voice calm but firm. “Harvey… she was honest. That takes courage.” His gaze flicked back to Ramona, steady but cautious. “We’ll figure this out. Somehow.”

Ramona’s throat tightened. The words sounded kind, but distant. To her, they felt like pity, not promise.

Harvey shook his head, drumming a bitter rhythm against the edge of his seat. “Brave? Or reckless? You don’t just drop confessions like bombs and expect the band to play on.”

The tension snapped like a string pulled too tight. Ramona’s hands trembled against her bass. “I’m sorry,” she said, her voice breaking. “I didn’t want to ruin this. Us. Especially now—when the Battle of the Bands is coming. We’ve fought too hard, practiced too much to throw it all away.”

For a moment, none of them moved. The silence was louder than any song they’d ever played. Then Ronski strummed a chord, soft and steady, filling the room with sound again.

“Maybe,” he said, “the music can handle the truth better than we can.”

Harvey’s drumming slowed, softened, until it matched the rhythm. Ramona pressed her fingers to the strings, letting the bass hum beneath them. The sound wasn’t perfect, but it was honest.

For the first time, their band wasn’t just music. It was confessions, confrontations, and the fragile ties holding them together.

Amplified Awkwardness

The gym buzzed with anticipation, voices bouncing off the high ceilings like static. Students crowded near the stage, phones raised, waiting for the first notes. This was it—the Battle of the Bands they had fought for, practiced for, sacrificed sleep for. Tonight, everything was on the line.

Ramona adjusted her bass strap, her palms slick with sweat. Her chest still carried the weight of last night’s confession, but she forced herself to breathe. Don’t ruin this. Not now.

Harvey spun his sticks, jaw tight, his glare sharp even under the stage lights. He slammed the snare once, testing its bite, the sound cracking like a warning.

Ronski tuned his guitar, calm as ever, his case propped open at the side of the stage. A faded luggage tag dangled from the handle, his name printed neatly: Ronski Cobain Castillo. He glanced at Ramona, steady and reassuring, though she couldn’t read what lingered behind his eyes.

The announcer’s voice boomed: “Up next—Chords and Strings!”

The crowd erupted, but Ramona’s stomach twisted. They had practiced too hard to let this fall apart now.

The first song began—Harvey’s drumming sharp, Ronski’s guitar smooth, Ramona’s bass steady. For a moment, it felt like all the tension had been swallowed by the music. But beneath the rhythm, the cracks pulsed. Harvey’s beats were too aggressive, his sticks striking harder than rehearsed. Ramona’s bassline wavered, her fingers trembling, nearly slipping out of sync.

Ronski steadied them, his guitar filling the gaps, his voice carrying across the gym:

The crowd swayed, some whispering, some recording, but all listening. Ramona’s chest tightened—her private words, now amplified for everyone. Harvey shot her a look, sharp and accusing, as if to say this is your mess.

She forced herself back into rhythm. They couldn’t mess this up. Not tonight. Not after everything.

By the time the last note rang out, the gym erupted in cheers. On the outside, they looked unstoppable—a band at the top of their game. But on stage, the silence between them was deafening.

Ronski set his guitar down gently, his voice low but clear. “We did it,” he said, though his eyes lingered on Ramona, heavy with something unsaid.

Harvey twirled his sticks, his voice dripping with sarcasm. “Congrats, Monafe. We survived. Barely.”

The crowd kept cheering, oblivious. But for Ramona, the applause felt hollow. The crowd cheered louder, but all I could hear was the silence between us.

Final Verse

The crowd erupted but Ramona felt only the hush of a song cut short, its last note swallowed before it could reach them.

Backstage, the gym’s echoes faded into muffled hums. The three of them lingered in the quiet, instruments resting against the wall, sweat cooling on their skin. The adrenaline of the performance still pulsed faintly, but beneath it lay something heavier truths that could no longer be ignored.

Ramona sat on the edge of a folding chair, bass across her lap, her fingers tracing the strings without sound. Vulnerability had been terrifying, but it had also been freeing. For the first time, she felt the strength in her own honesty.

Harvey leaned against the drum kit, twirling his sticks with restless energy. His smirk was gone, replaced by something softer, almost weary. “Well,” he said, breaking the silence, “we played our best gig yet. Raw, messy, real. The crowd loved it.” He let out a sharp laugh, but it carried no bite. “Guess pain makes good music.”

Ramona looked up, her throat tight. “Mhor…” she whispered, the nickname carrying both apology and affection.

He met her gaze, and for once, the sarcasm slipped. “I love you, Monafe,” he said, the words heavy, unpolished, raw. “I probably always will. But I want you to be happy—even if it’s not with me.” His voice cracked, but he forced a smile. “That’s what matters.”

Ramona’s chest ached. His confession was both a wound and a gift. She reached out, resting her hand lightly on his arm. “You matter to me too. More than you know.”

The silence stretched again, but this time it wasn’t suffocating. It was fragile, tender, like the pause between verses.

Ronski set his guitar down gently, his fingers brushing the faded luggage tag on the case. He looked at Ramona, his expression steady, but his voice carried something deeper. 

“I need to say this before it eats me alive,” he began. His words were calm, but his eyes betrayed the storm beneath. “I have feelings for you, Ramona. I’ve had them for a while. I didn’t say anything because… I didn’t want to ruin what we have. The band. Our friendship. Everything.”

Ramona’s breath caught. For a moment, she thought she had misheard him. The kindness she had mistaken for pity was something else entirely—something she had been too blind, too afraid, to see.

“You… you do?” she whispered, her voice trembling.

Ronski nodded, his smile faint but real. “Yeah. I do. But I don’t want us to rush into something that breaks what we’ve built. I want us to grow into it. Together.”

Harvey leaned back, exhaling sharply, but his smirk returned—this time softer, almost resigned. “Well, at least someone finally said it. Took you long enough, Castillo.” His tone carried no bitterness now, only weary acceptance.

Ramona’s eyes burned, but she refused to let the tears fall. Instead, she laughed—a shaky, fragile laugh that felt like release. “You guys… you’re impossible.”

The three of them sat there, tangled in confessions and contradictions, but steadied by the music that had carried them this far. The Battle of the Bands had been their strongest performance yet—not because they were flawless, but because they were real.

Ramona realized then that love didn’t have to be perfect to matter. It could be messy, complicated, even painful. But it was still love. And it was hers.

Later that night, back in her room, she set her bass gently against the wall and turned to her desk. Her cactus stood tall, its spines sharp but its body thriving, reaching toward the light. She touched the pot, smiling faintly.

Like the cactus, she had survived—scarred, imperfect, but resilient. And for the first time, she believed she could grow.

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