Unapologetically, Reena by Trouble

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Unapologetically, Reena

He unfolded the paper.

The handwriting was neat. Educated. Controlled.

But it did not read like a letter.

It read like something that had never been meant for the world.

Like a page torn from a mind that had been silent for too long.

‘Dear Inspector Malik,

I don’t know why I am writing to you.

This was never meant to be sent. I don’t even know if I will ever let anyone read it. Perhaps this is only a way to empty the noise inside my head. Perhaps this is what confession feels like when no one is listening.

You will never read this.

And yet I keep writing your name.

Because ten years ago, you looked at me and decided I was not worth believing.

I think that was the moment I understood how alone I truly was.

You searched for her everywhere. I watched you on the news. Rivers. Abandoned buildings. Empty fields. You questioned neighbours, colleagues, strangers.

You never thought to search where I buried my rage.

She is alive.

Yes, even now.

Sometimes I sit outside the room and listen to her breathing, just to remind myself that I did not become a murderer.

I told myself that was mercy.

But mercy is a strange thing. It rots when you hold it too long.

You deserve to know why.

Or maybe I deserve to say it.

She hated me from the first day.

Because I proved her wrong.

One mistake in front of a classroom full of children. That was all it took. From that moment, I was no longer a student. I was a problem. A warning. An example.

She called me arrogant.

She called me disrespectful.

She told the class I was difficult.

And children believe what teachers tell them.

They laughed when I spoke. They whispered when I walked past. She made sure of it.

Every assignment I worked for hours on was returned with red ink. Never enough. Never correct.

She told the principal I cheated.

She told my parents I was unstable.

She told scholarship boards I lacked character.

I watched my future close in front of me, door after door.

When I cried, she smiled.

When I begged, she said, This is discipline.

I began to wonder if I was the monster she believed me to be.

No one believed me.

Not even you.

So one day, I stopped asking to be believed.

The night I took her, I thought I would feel powerful.

I thought I would feel justice.

But revenge is not justice.

It is hunger.

It grows.

I wanted her to feel what I felt. The waiting. The helplessness. The certainty that no one was coming.

At first, I told myself I would release her after a week.

Then a month.

Then a year.

Time became meaningless.

Ten years is a long time to become someone you hate.

Sometimes I look at my reflection and do not recognise the person staring back.

Sometimes I think I should end this.

But I am afraid that if I do, she will win again.

I do not know how to stop.

I do not know how to let go.

I am tired, Inspector.

So tired.

Perhaps that is why I am writing this.

Because silence has become heavier than truth.

If you are reading this, it means I failed to destroy these pages.

Or perhaps some part of me wanted to be found.

I do not know which is more frightening.’

The diary entry ended.

No signature.

But he already knew.

By noon, Malik stood at the edge of the forest with a small team behind him. Officially, he had retired three years ago. Unofficially, the department had called within minutes of his report.

They had not asked why his voice sounded strained. They had not asked why his hands trembled.

Some ghosts did not need explanation.

The forest rose before them, dense and unmoving, its silence heavy in a way that felt almost deliberate. As if it had waited ten years for this moment.

Malik unfolded the map once more, though he had already memorised every turn.

“Stay sharp,” he said, his voice steadier than he felt.

They began walking.

With every step, memories surfaced uninvited—search parties combing through the undergrowth, reporters shoving microphones toward his face, Payal’s mother collapsing against barricades, accusing him with eyes hollowed by grief.

The only unsolved case of his career.

His disgrace.

The path narrowed. Branches clawed at their uniforms. The air grew damp and close.

After nearly an hour, one of the officers stopped.

“Sir… here.”

It was almost invisible.

A patch of earth slightly raised, roots arranged too neatly, leaves placed with care rather than carelessness.

A hiding place built by patience.

They began to dig.

Soon, wood appeared beneath the soil. A concealed trapdoor.

The lock was rusted but intact.

Malik felt his heartbeat in his throat as they forced it open.

The smell hit first, damp, metal, and something older. The scent of time sealed away.

A narrow staircase descended into darkness.

Flashlights cut through the black.

And then –

They saw her.

Ms. Payal.

For a moment, no one moved.

She was thinner, her face drawn and lined, her hair streaked with grey. Chains bound her wrists and ankles. But her chest rose and fell.

Alive.

The word felt unreal.

“Careful,” Malik said, though his voice barely carried.

The officers rushed forward. Metal clanged as the chains were broken. She began to weep, soundless, as though she had forgotten how.

One officer called for an ambulance. Another let out a disbelieving laugh.

Malik remained where he was.

Ten years.

Alive.

Sunlight blinded him when he stepped out of the chamber. He shielded his eyes as medics carried her toward the vehicles.

Hours passed in a blur.

Her family arrived. Cries echoed through the trees. They clung to her, as if she might disappear again if they loosened their grip.

Reporters gathered beyond the perimeter, their questions rising like insects in the heat.

But Malik heard none of it.

Because an officer approached him, holding a plastic evidence bag.

Inside was a folded sheet of paper.

Blue ink.

The same writing.

This letter was shorter.

‘Inspector Malik,

It is time for me to let both of them go.

Ms. Payal.

And my resentment toward her.

I am not running from the law. I am merely evading it until I decide I am ready to be punished.

Unapologetically,

Reena.’

Malik stared at the ink.

Still glossy.

Still wet.

His pulse slowed instead of racing.

Fresh.

Recently written.

He lifted his gaze.

The forest surrounded them on all sides. Dense. Impenetrable. No path in or out without crossing the officers stationed at every exit.

Which meant only one thing.

She had not left.

She was here.

Watching.

The family gathered around Payal in a protective circle. Among them stood a young woman Malik did not recognise.

She held Payal gently, whispering reassurances.

“Her niece,” someone explained. “From her sister’s side. She appeared a few months after the disappearance. Stayed with the family ever since. Took care of everything.”

Malik studied her.

She looked ordinary. Soft-spoken. Kind.

But something in her stillness unsettled him.

The woman looked up.

Their eyes met.

Time folded.

And Malik knew.

He walked toward her.

The officers followed.

The woman’s smile faltered, though she did not step back.

“How did you know?” she asked quietly.

Malik held up the evidence bag.

“The ink,” he said. “It hasn’t dried yet. Written minutes ago. You wouldn’t have had time to leave without crossing us.”

Her shoulders lowered, as if a weight had finally settled.

“But that isn’t enough,” she said.

“No,” Malik agreed.

He stepped closer.

“The rest… your eyes.”

She frowned faintly.

“I remember them,” he continued. “Ten years ago, when everyone else was anxious, you weren’t. You looked at me as if you had already decided I would fail you.”

For the first time, exhaustion replaced composure.

Behind her, Payal stared, recognition dawning in slow horror.

“Reena?”

The name fractured the air.

Reena closed her eyes.

“I wanted you to feel it,” she said softly. “Just once. The waiting. The silence. The certainty that no one was coming.”

Payal began to sob.

“I thought you were dead.”

“I know.”

“And now?”

Reena opened her eyes and met Malik’s gaze.

“Now I’m tired.”

The officers placed handcuffs around her wrists.

She did not resist.

As they led her away, she paused.

“Inspector.”

He turned.

“You never asked why I wrote the diary.”

“Why?”

A faint, tired smile.

“Because some part of me wanted to stop.”

She glanced toward the forest.

“And because some truths are heavier when they stay buried.”

That night, Malik sat alone in his apartment.

The case was closed.

His name would be restored. The headlines would call it redemption.

But the pages lay open on his table.

He read them again.

And again.

Because one line refused to leave him.

Ten years is a long time to become someone you hate.

Outside, the city slept.

Malik wondered whether justice had truly been served.

Or whether the forest had simply returned one monster to the world,

And kept the rest.

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